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"Silence" revisited!

The original "Silence"
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'Silence' revisited!! With a few contributions from my friends...!!
Thank you Samina, Sumit, Yanka, Shreyas, Janki, Soumya and Mira for your thoughts!! 
**Some changes and editions have been made but thank you for your ideas and your inspirations**
Here's to you....


**This was by Simi Aapa Urf. Janaab Samina Shamim)**

Silence
Sometimes you stand for the truth
And sometimes you personify the cruelest of lies
Your shackles bind Me
And I burn as you watch me
You're as cold as ice!


**And this I think was by Sumit**

Silence
You've lost your own game, 
These voices that you tried to block
They're talkin to me, 

They're screamin my name
And you said eloquence renders efforts fruitless jus the same?! 

Bah! What a shame!!


**Ducky's input @Priyanka Sanikop**
Silence
I'm awake now
my 'conscious' is active
I have compliments to give
What a lovely poem, wow!



** Shreyas Shringarpure, thanks!**
Silence
You've been my most trusthworthy aide
When attempts at courage; none, i made
You're the sole witness to my chaos
for all, that is my loss
Silence
We go a long way
Always its been you to hav your say
You sure dont let me be
Happiness ever to let me see!



**Janki's take on Silence**
Silence
Why are you getting louder than the words I choose not to say
Or are you just a void echoing in my brain?!
You're witness to my unconvincing strength, 
This is to let you know I hear you consciously!


**Soumya 'The Tubbster' Prem speaks for "Silence"...**
Silence
Get away before you crush me
Under your loud and deafening feet
You need to stop coming back here
Dont stop by at this house or this street!

**And MIRAjuana's intoxicated silent siloloque**
Silence
You roar and moan and giggle within me
You're silent but never quiet
Alone but never lonely..
silence
Do you enjoy with me 
As much as I enjoy your company?!

**and finally to conclude.. If i may say...*
Silence
You think you’re invincible?
Coz you speak a million words
In *sighs* and *grunts*
And all things unfathomable!

Silence
We’ve got time what’s the hurry
And.. My Lady, don’t you worry
Someday be prepared
To hear from Me your own story!!

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